My hands shake as tears drench my skin
I look out, searching for an unknown thing
maybe looking for where happiness turned to sin
and what penetrated my once joyful way of thinking
I want to collapse, I need to fall
no longer can I carry myself
this burden I cannot haul
so please restore my health
Give me someone to walk beside
to hold me when I fall under the flames
that from them I won't have to hide
and with me they will bear my pains
If I am going to stand any longer
I need that person to make me stronger
Having someone there to comfort and offer words of encouragement does make a difference when we are feeling down. I liked reading your poem.
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DeleteI think you should just let yourself fall and then rise anew without all these burdens that once weighed you down, like a Phoenix in its new birth. Beautiful poem, loved it
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Thank you very much, and I love the metaphor!
DeleteWonderful composition !!
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